summer almost haiku

June 27, 2006

thunderheads rumble
into the hot night softly
soon cool raindrops

2 Responses to “summer almost haiku”

  1. qazse Says:

    Please note: I have not written 18,759,327,938 unnamed haiku poems.
    If I did I would have carpal tunnel syndrome of the mind (although something not dissmilar has afflicted me since beginning to diagram sentences way back in the Fifties).

    Rest assured this is a scientifically derived estimate of this phenomenon’s ( ie unnamed  haiku) occurrence since the time of Basho. Parenthetically, Basho is considered by many to be the first Marx brother.

  2. fencer Says:

    Hi qazse,

    I came across your site after visiting Slice’s which I do often…

    I enjoy your writing and poetry… more than enjoy. I was especially moved by “The night Joe left.”

    Looking forward to reading more on your site…


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