Viva Las Vatican

September 13, 2007

I was taught
only Catholics are saved.

I would worry
Elvis might burn in hell.

I did pray
for his conversion.

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4 Responses to “Viva Las Vatican”

  1. Jason Keath's avatar Jak Says:

    September 25, 2007 at 9:30 am

    it builds up well. a pleasing insight.

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  2. slynne's avatar slynne Says:

    September 25, 2007 at 10:57 am

    I love the first and second stanzas… brilliant

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  3. qazse's avatar qazse Says:

    September 25, 2007 at 8:17 pm

    Jak and slynne – thank you both! I appreciate that you continue to stop by and comment. You are both admirable writers.

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  4. qazse's avatar qazse Says:

    September 25, 2007 at 8:19 pm

    ps: is this really two poems?

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