long journey

October 17, 2007


pond2.jpg

the sky rests
upon the earth
in a pond

 

Posted in Haiku and Senryu, nature, outdoors, Poetry, sky | 6 Comments »
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6 Responses to “long journey”

  1. writesome's avatar writesome Says:

    October 17, 2007 at 6:34 pm

    That’s beautiful! Thanks for sharing and for dropping by earlier.

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  2. qazse's avatar qazse Says:

    October 18, 2007 at 9:04 am

    thank you!
    my pleasure…

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  3. c's avatar chughes Says:

    October 18, 2007 at 9:38 am

    Simple things are the most wonder-filled things- like this poem.
    i wish i could write this way- saying just what is there. For me, the best poems are this way.

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  4. qazse's avatar qazse Says:

    October 18, 2007 at 1:35 pm

    Do you read much haiku? That is a good way to allow yourself to open to it. I like a lot of Kerouac’s stuff.

    Thanks for your comments!

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  5. fencer's avatar fencer Says:

    October 18, 2007 at 10:53 pm

    Words and image working together again!

    Regards

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  6. qazse's avatar qazse Says:

    October 19, 2007 at 10:55 am

    thank you fencer

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