The spiritual revolution may come too late

April 13, 2006

just as saying “I love you”
or “I’m sorry”
may come too late –
while slipping out of this life
on your back
mute and alone
surrounded by strangers.

Posted in Poetry, time | 2 Comments »

2 Responses to “The spiritual revolution may come too late”

  1. Chris Says:

    April 16, 2006 at 12:53 am

    This is honestly, one of the best poems I have heard in a long time, it is very hard to master the art of metaphors, but you got it.

    Reply
  2. qazse Says:

    April 16, 2006 at 1:30 am

    Thank you Chris. Tell mom I love her.

    Reply

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