an infinity apart (perhaps 9)

January 21, 2007

this is
the dimension
of acute pleasure

of explosion –

its origins dictate such.

beyond
is very much
elsewhere –

infinities other than

this one.

 

Posted in infinity, Perhaps, Poetry, spirit, universe | 5 Comments »

5 Responses to “an infinity apart (perhaps 9)”

  1. lqz Says:

    January 21, 2007 at 11:36 pm

    I can’t say this poem means anything to me. However I like your choice in words and how you placed them. I like that there are no capital letters and I liked reading it. If that makes any sence to you.

    Reply
  2. lifewords Says:

    January 21, 2007 at 11:39 pm

    Very, very nice.

    Reply
  3. synesius Says:

    January 23, 2007 at 5:24 am

    the music of this words sounds to me like a Sakamoto minimalist piece.
    soft and intense.

    Reply
  5. qazse Says:

    January 25, 2007 at 12:42 am

    lqz, lifewords, synesius, and Crafty Green, Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I appreciate it.

    this existence
    is explosive –
    look at our
    procreation
    and problem solving

    from the big bang
    to Iraq

    explosives…

    Reply

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