always saying goodbye always saying hello

August 17, 2007

with each wave
these last moments
bathe our consciousness

there was nothing else…

(but jobs are waiting)

put the tiny shells
in your pockets
I tell the boys

so the big ones won’t crush them.

two buddies –
they are eleven
never to be eleven again.

the breeze hides my tears.

2003

7 Responses to “always saying goodbye always saying hello”

  1. qazse's avatar qazse Says:

    this is a repost from last summer – thanks for reading.

    peace

  2. ClapSo's avatar ClapSo Says:

    Glad you reposted it. I hadn’t found your excellent blog last summer.

    The scientifically impossible I do right away
    The spiritually miraculous takes a bit longer

  3. qazse's avatar qazse Says:

    thank you ClapSo!

    BTW: If only I had a Coca Cola and some Fritos at that moment in time, it would have been so much more poignant… Oh well…

  4. Soulless's avatar Soulless Says:

    Evocative, without stating the obvious. ^_^ Great work.

  5. Howard's avatar Howard Says:

    Thanks for reposting, Q. Great poem, and so bittersweet.

  6. Jason Keath's avatar Jak Says:

    never to be eleven again indeed. very pleasant and calm. a memory to me.

  7. qazse's avatar qazse Says:

    Souless, Howard, and Jak: (sounds like a law firm)

    thank you for the encouragement


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