changing in place
April 28, 2008
new package
new bottles
new make
new models
new fashion
new faces
new gadget
new places
old game
new looks
old fish
new hooks
wrestling with congruency
new package
new bottles
new make
new models
new fashion
new faces
new gadget
new places
old game
new looks
old fish
new hooks
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April 28, 2008 at 2:02 pm
this is a re-post from may07
April 28, 2008 at 5:07 pm
i recognized it.
And the last strophe is just so strong.
A correct diagnosis.
Correct.
Your poems are hands tearing the wool from our eyes.
April 28, 2008 at 9:21 pm
Brilliant. Finishes like a punch in the gut. I just can’t believe I didn’t notice it last year.
April 28, 2008 at 9:35 pm
c, if I were doing a self promotion I would certainly feature your wool tearing reference.
howard, these posts of mine are so brief they are easily unnoticed.
Thank You Both so much. I am so blessed to have your regard!
May 15, 2008 at 7:10 pm
punch in the gut
is an apt description.
your word economy is very, very admirable.
i didn’t realize you were posting again. forgive my delay.
May 15, 2008 at 9:20 pm
I am still in limbo. I have been re-posting old stuff just to keep the site fresh. I have put some new stuff up now and then. I do have the itch but no time to do it properly just yet. Thank you for your comments. You are very kind.