changing in place

April 28, 2008

new package
new bottles
new make
new models

new fashion
new faces
new gadget
new places

old game
new looks
old fish
new hooks

6 Responses to “changing in place”

  1. qazse Says:

    this is a re-post from may07

  2. c Says:

    i recognized it.
    And the last strophe is just so strong.
    A correct diagnosis.
    Correct.

    Your poems are hands tearing the wool from our eyes.

  3. howard Says:

    Brilliant. Finishes like a punch in the gut. I just can’t believe I didn’t notice it last year.

  4. qazse Says:

    c, if I were doing a self promotion I would certainly feature your wool tearing reference.

    howard, these posts of mine are so brief they are easily unnoticed.

    Thank You Both so much. I am so blessed to have your regard!

  5. clancyjane Says:

    punch in the gut
    is an apt description.

    your word economy is very, very admirable.

    i didn’t realize you were posting again. forgive my delay.

  6. qazse Says:

    I am still in limbo. I have been re-posting old stuff just to keep the site fresh. I have put some new stuff up now and then. I do have the itch but no time to do it properly just yet. Thank you for your comments. You are very kind.


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