water gap

October 14, 2008


two mountains reach down
cup the river in bedrock
eternal playmates

painting by Edward Raymes

8 Responses to “water gap”

  1. krkbaker Says:

    “Eternal playmates”, I like that idea. Kind of like they are constantly teasing one another, like in a game of tag or something. If one zigs, the other zigs, and if it zags…you know. Fun.
    kim

  2. qazse Says:

    Hello kim! Would “eternal lovers” work better? Or would that connote more tenderness than anything else?

  3. Wayne Says:

    I do appreciate your style and economy of words. Beautiful. Thank you.

  4. qazse Says:

    Wayne, thank You!

  5. tipota Says:

    very lovely. i am inspired, thankyou

  6. krkbaker Says:

    Q, no I’d leave it as it is. I really like it. Lovers would overdo it.

  7. qazse Says:

    Kim, thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it. I will keep it as is – playful, zigging and zagging…


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