let it snow
January 8, 2010
tonight we huddle –
the crackling fire gives forth
all we require
2006/2008
wrestling with congruency
tonight we huddle –
the crackling fire gives forth
all we require
2006/2008
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January 8, 2010 at 4:39 pm
Exquisite – ‘require’, ‘huddle’, those two words are very beautiful (vowel sounds and meaning) when placed next to each other like that and so perfectly balanced.
January 9, 2010 at 6:44 am
love the title as well as the haiku, the way it leads in and sums up, too.
January 10, 2010 at 1:52 am
Paul and Pauline – I will refrain from any jokes about the pairing of your names and get right to the appreciation I feel for your supportive remarks here and through the years. You both and many others have been very positive about what I do. Do you think I should submit some of it? And if so, where.
January 10, 2010 at 9:00 am
Poetry is often a hard sell. Start with magazines, university presses and small publishing houses. Good luck!
January 10, 2010 at 8:54 pm
Yes I think you should submit some of it. Anywhere, everywhere there are millions of journals and some that specialise in tiny poems. Yours are some of the best tiny poems I’ve ever read and more people should be given the opportunity to experience them.
January 12, 2010 at 11:56 pm
Thank you! I am profoundly flattered. I will start by entering a contest either one of you might be interested in: http://www.thehaikufoundation.org/contest/haiku-now-contest-2010/.
If you ever have a suggestion or constructive feedback, please feel free to divulge it!
Thanks again…